Wednesday, September 28, 2011

Love is difficult

What something that we all don't have success with
Its so hard to believe in it because its like a myth
What are some of us tired of
Well my friends its called Love
Love is a complicated thing
Its exactly like a string
If you don't treat it right
It will "snap"
So don't fool around when it comes to love or its just a trap
But if you have success with it
Then you are quite the one to express it and recommit for it
And if your good with love you wont have a fit
So don't just ignore what i'm writing
Its definitely worth fighting
Love can be difficult yes, yes it can
But its something that everyone wants, so be prepared...and have a plan.

     For this poem I decided to also thing about what our class poem was about which was love and basically make a poem of my own. In this poem I give love a difficult and bad from the perspective of the reader. I  say that it maybe very difficult but yet it is still worth it. One thing that I was thinking about was that I wanted it to rhyme and makes sense at the same time. Yes it did take longer to create the poem since the rhymes had to make sense but I found that it made my poem sound better. I added a slight bit of humor near the end which was the line that said "have a plan" because honestly I just wanted to make it funny as I thought the poem was a little to serious but if I added to much comedy to it then it wouldn't necessarily have the same effect on the reader. So for my poem I tried quite hard to make it my own and to customize it the way I want it to be, I also gave it a meaning which is love can be difficult but its worth it and that if you read this I want you to think about it as well as being inspired by it.

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