A great example, S.O.P.A or Stop Online Piracy Act may defy what I have just said. I want you to imagine websites and their countless pages of info about something. Imagine them being worked on for many years and then they are taken away in a matter of seconds just because of one small flaw. The government has the right idea when S.O.P.A was taken into action but they didn't realize that they were destroying countless pages of information that we can never retrieve again. Wikipedia....the biggest human made encyclopedia to date, its something so huge and each one of its pages has info on something. Since Wikipedia was made it had pages added to it, wouldn't it be a waist if we just get rid of the site? S.O.P.A blocks any site or gets rid of any site with any piracy in it, the smallest amount of piracy can get a whole site blocked. Imagine if they took down Wikipedia, imagine how much info we would've lost if that happened.
Information is definitely worth fighting for. Imagine if we all just stood there learning nothing and just losing all the info we have learned. Information teaches us how to do things, its what our daily lives revolve around. During all of our lives we will all learn something. That something is being explained and taught to us, that's info that is being given to us. Why fight for it? It is valuable to some degree. It could info on how to type or it could be info on missile launch codes. Those are two different varying degrees of information. The info that is used less is more threatened towards extinction. Less and less people know about info that is less used therefore it would just get to a point, that point is when none of us know about it and we have lost it for good.
Education a giant thing that teaches us all information and prepares us for life in the future. What happens if that is taken away? We have no future. The degree of information we lose may severely hurt us but if we lose education we lose most of our lives. Things could happen and maybe one day we lose schools or education. Imagine what happens to all young lings and no education. They have no basis of life. In order to survive in this world we have to all have information taught to us.A baby doesn't know how to do multiplication or even talk for that matter. If us humans were to take away information to that extent then life would be simple but it would be extremely hard to live.
The more and more you work on something the better but you must realize that as information gets updated, it gets bigger and it needs more protection. Unfortunately information is something taken for granted now a days. You never no what you have till its gone. And when its gone we cannot do anything about it. Information is what we all have in our minds, info on how to walk, info on tomorrow's test, info on anything. If we lose that info our lives may get harder in someway. For example, you miss a day of math class and then the next day your there in math class. You don't know what they are talking about and you don't know what to do. What do you do?.... What do we do if we don't have that info? Do we panic? What do we do?.....
Simply Amazing. A couple of minor errors such as spelling and grammar so I would recommend revising it because you are missing tiny bits like commas, but overall EXCELLENT work. You added really good examples to help the reader understand how much more important info is than the understanding they would normally get from just reading it simply, so they have a deeper understanding of what you are trying to say which is a great idea. I love how at the end, you added a question to leave the reader thinking, which is Brilliant. Not many people can think of something like that to make the reader go even deeper, to TRULY understand the depth and importance of this. You even gave the reader an idea of what would happen if we were to lose information, which will give them an even wider and more open understanding of information. Well Done.
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